Hello, just letting you know that I think this essay is extremely helpful and I am definitely adding this to my favourites!

(Also mentioning it on FPHaven's blog XD to point others in the right direction).

Again thank you for writing this, commas were always my weak point. No doubt yo've already noticed that.

Bye.

Nice guide and all but I have one question: What happens if, when you reach fdor the ceiling, you actually are able to touch it?

Oi! I love this writing piece to bits and pieces! I've been thinking of writing a guide to creating believable characters/stories. This piece inspires me to do just that! Thanks for the reviews for DND and I hope you review again (I keep making modifications to Act One, yes a real chapter, just so you like it!) Peace-chan you are so magnificent!

Very elegant, very classy and exceedingly useful! This is a GREAT piece of work to help out all of the aspiring authors on this site! Hell, I even learned a thing or two that I didn't know! How's that for helpful? LOL! Anyway, I like what you've done here Peace. Your Handbook is sure to aid a lot of people who wish to improve upon their writing (providing that they actually take your advice and not think that they are too good for it!). It is rife with great examples and chock full of extrememly useful information. I'd give two thumbs ups WAY up high! Keep up the good work Peace!

Terryll Preston, still2twisted of FictionPress fame...

-high five- I definately needed to read something like this to help me out with my essay. I tend to comma splice a lot. Oh, maybe you could add verb tenses? That's a really common mistake in my class! ^-^ Hmn...I think reading your example for "everday" and "every day" cleared my confusion about "sometimes" and "some times". Awesome, Dude (sorry, I call everyone dude)! Hope to see more from ya soon? =)

~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.

I haven't gotten around to reading it all yet, but it has given me a lot to think about in my writing. You know your stuff, Peace Writer! To take a leaf from your book, "Peace out!"

Loved this! A GREAT help. Although, one of your examples bugged me...“**Suddenly**, Sally slipped on the slippery floor. Fortunately, she grabbed the freezer handle to prop herself back up. All of the **sudden**, her dog ran into the kitchen, and slammed into her leg, causing her to crash swiftly to the floor.”

I don't know, maybe it's me, but the use of two phrases so similar as suddenly and all of the sudden bugs me. And once you said 'most vague' instead of vaguest...and that's it.

Awesome handbook, this really helped me. Thank you!

Thank you very much for writing this! It was extremely helpful.

very useful. thanks! that just proves you can learn something from the internet!