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tii jay 2005-10-05 . chapter 1
lmao. yes yes yes, i really liked it.
godawful teen-angst poetry 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
i get the double entendre, but i don't really like the poem that much. you can make a lot more out of this idea.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Ah, nice contrasts esp. the apple pie.
nanashi-04 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Good one ^_^, keep writing
Faithless Juliet 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
I like that; keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
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