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| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-08-01 ch 22,  | abusenice vampire romance. one of the best i've read. wen are u going to continue the sequel? anyway, nice lemon for the first time! hehe. |
| lostlette 2008-07-26 ch 24, | abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! |
| l'heautontimoroumenos 2008-07-24 ch 22, | abusegreat story. I just love the way you consider vampirism as being some weird kind of sickness. It's really well written and all, so I just might as well say "félicitaschtroumf" (yes, I'm french) |
| Tickle my Pickle 2008-07-13 ch 22, | abuseThis is one of the best vampire romance stories I have read. I really like your concept of how they became vampires. I absolutely adored the relationship between Lea and Tobias. They had amazing chemistry. I loved how Tobias only saw her. Shelly was absolutely hilarious and the way Tobias dealt with her was hysterical. I felt that I got to know all of the characters. One of the things I appreciated was the fact that Lea had a boyfriend before Tobias. I get so tired of reading stories about the typical "innocent" girl, but meanwhile the guy is far from it. It just refreshing to read where the girl had someone before the guy. You told such an intricate story that I never got bored while reading. Definitely going on my favorites. |
| Booklover91 2008-07-11 ch 6, | abusehaha! this chapter was funny...The vanilla thing , Lol...haha |
| Booklover91 2008-07-10 ch 3, | abuseaw tobias is sweet. :) |
| Booklover91 2008-07-10 ch 2, | abuseThe story is getting off to a good start...I'm envious of Lea though, she has a hot vampire guy staying in her room...haha |
| Booklover91 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseAW well since you asked so nicely I suppose I'm reviewing... :) jay kay :) Anyways, I love that name Tobias Mordikai, it sounds SO sexy... hehe :D And he sounds REALLY hot... |
| Mikah329 2008-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseAbsolutely amazing. And Bango di Sangue qould be correct. I've gone through Italina 1 twice so far, and I'm sure it's correct. haha Tobias is my new vampire love, by the way. ^_^ |
| EkohEmery 2008-07-03 ch 2, anon. | abuse...I was looking for a vampire story to keep me company, but I didn't expect to find THIS. First of all, it's amazing. Second of all, Tobias seems to be a nearly perfect replica of a vampire I created in my mind five years ago. Jeeze, do all of my ideas get broadcast out to writers everywhere? XD It seems like every new idea I come up with, somebody beats me to it. Well, amazing job, either way. You have much talent. :) |
| Ashes0909 2008-07-03 ch 22, | abuseAww I loved this! Its so hard to keep a story going for so long, but you didn't lose me once. I loved your Vampire world and its many dynamics as well as the situation around Lea's tainting. Kudos girl :) |
| Ashes0909 2008-07-02 ch 14, | abuseI've been reading this fic for a couple days and have yet to review but this chapter deemed it necessary. That scene was hot!! Made me fan myself. :) Can't wait to click over to chapter 15. |
| Piroko Hatake 2008-06-24 ch 22, | abuseMe like! You could probably go on with this idea. In fact I encourage you to. MORE CHAOS FOR ALETHEA AND TOBIAS! |
| MamiPapi 2008-06-18 ch 22, | abusei really enjoyed this story :) |
| Tamza 2008-06-08 ch 20, anon. | abuseim glad Nadia and her farther had a happy ending in this chap |