Oh! Now this is my kind of Poem! You are officially on my nice list! Never heard it better put. Everybody does everything now because Jesus told them to. I know exactly what you mean and agree totally! Keep up the isanely amazing work and your insanely brilliant brain!

the word 'die' is used too much for my taste, but I'll ignore that nitpick for a bit. and the line - "Suck out my forsaken soul" just doesn't sound right to me.

anyway, I really like the repitition 'puppet of god' as it just gave this a more powerful feel to it. I love how powerful ( yet stinted ) the ending is. just, overall, a very fine read.

* noelle

wow...that is freaking awesome! god i just love your poems...they are really good

i like this one alot too!