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| LauraKM 2005-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseThis is brilliant, your writing is really elaborate and imaginative, love the imagery. The idea of weeds is great and the last stanza i love. The enjambement makes it more like a story and works really well. Really good poem. |
| Chandra-Moon 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, even if I don't understand it. I know someone is sleeping with someones wife...maybe a jew. But I don't really know. That's ok though, because I'm just dumb. Interesting poem! Wonderful last line. |
| morbid-scribbles 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseHm... from who's point of view is this? I'm reall intrested. The only thing I can think of is a Nazi. Correct me if I'm wrong please. Beautiful poem. I esp. loved the weed part. |