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| AllyCred 2005-10-08 ch 1,  | abusei like it...a good read. lots of love ~AC~ |
| catseyeview 2005-10-06 ch 1, | abuseSince I teach history this has so much meaning - I love it and fully understand it. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing. |
| Aldarona Finarfin 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWell, if I said I knew what you were thinking, I'd be lying. Horribly. But even still, I like it! Ha ha. But, I really do like it. It's almost biting, and, after relating it to the title, it is entirely biting. I like it. Oh! And I read part of your profile. I'd have to say that, if not my favorite, Animals is at least very, very close to my favorite Pink Floyd album. Go you! |
| destinee ariarti 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseshort indeed -- but very powerful |
| simpletonsgrin 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abusejust wanted to notify you of a typo on line three: "thier" should be "their." This was short, but it was still enjoyable. I felt like it was missing a line before the last one. It just didn't seem to flow right. Still, good job. -simpleton |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseYou sould like an angry tax payer; as you should, 8 cent gass tax I swear its enough to make me pull all of my hair out. Juliet. |