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His Mercy's Waiting
2005-10-14
ch 1, 		abusewow, that really is a tough situation. i loved this part:

"Her life seems one-ended

Like a ‘no exit’ sign"

it's cool how you can just imagine that in your mind...good job.

~happy writing!~
Beautiful Dream
2005-10-05
ch 1, 		abuseSo cuute... adorable. *tear tear* weepfulness.
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