Hmm...this poem seems to be strongly related to death.

It was somewhat eerie after I read over it a second time. :)

Keep writing!

this kind of reminds me of 'stopping by woods on a snowy evening' by robert frost. it has the same repetive effect at the end that leaves it slightly haunting.

Whoa.

Cool.

I hate sleep too. It's just such an interruption to life.

Wow! I really, really like this one. Your style is so awesome! _

wow... i liked how the first few lines had rhyming and then it sort of just drifts off like sleep very nicely written

keep writing!