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CheChe 2005-10-13 . chapter 1
o...love it!especially love "collecting the thoughts that walk by my bench/ piecing together mosaic smiles" can just see that!also like "listening as my God laughs softly"

do you have favorite words you like to use in your poems, or does that just happen?
Calder 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
I love the imagery here. "Gazing at the watercolor raindrops, ..Listening as my God laughs softly"

Wonderful. Keep it up.
mizu no kokoro 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
Pretty imagery~ i like the overall tone of this poem^^

keep writing!
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