Absolutely brilliant. Flow, rhyme, message it conveys.. everything seems so flawless. I adore it.

Beautiful. Enchanting, from the very first line... I really liked it.

wow. I really like this poem. It's short sweet and to the point and it doesn't suck. Keep up the good work.

It seems somewhat like fantasy, for a 'wicked past to be blurry', for someone to reach out to you and say it'll be alright. But maybe that's just me, because I fear no one will ever tell me, "Do not worry."

oh my "Never occurred before,

That a beautiful girl,

Could have no one to hold."

ilove it.my, my!personally, i can not write.But those lines...

I think that all poems have a meaning connected with the writer or friend... very good.

I understand the scenario in this, but I'm not sure I understand the position of the speaker. Maybe a little more explination on that point? But your writing is very good; a clean, simple style and very good grammar.

Aw, that's so sweet! I especially like the line about crying golden tears- it seems very pretty. An upbeat poem, I like it a lot.

Such a large difference that a few small words can make. Very well done!

American girls may be **, but I'm Canadian! Thanks for your review.

-Peace

Aw! So touching! You hit the spot!

LOVED IT!! I mean it when I say that. I go to a poetry club, where I hear lots of crap, so I think I'm qualified to say this was absolutely beautiful. My heart was touched by it. I wish I had a guy like that :) Keep it up man.

very hopefully at the end, and I loved it; "Your heart was cured, / Now the wicked past seems blurry." pretty image. Good work.