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2005-11-20
ch 1,
abuseAwesome poem , I love the way you have set it out and the wording you used, great work!
Alazar-Ramir
2005-11-17
ch 1,
abuseCreepy and dark but loved. Has a wonderful atmosphere althought the summary put me off. After reading it I knew what to expect. Still good though.
Darlingdeath
2005-10-24
ch 1,
abuseWow, this poem would be absoloutely perfect, if you found a way to drop a few of the "these"s and "they"s... Its so powerful and amazing... Great work!
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