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nanashi-04 2006-01-07 . chapter 1
Reminds me when I was younger.
ronshaberry 2005-10-19 . chapter 5
This is funny. It kind of reminds me of Calvin and Hobbes. It's like your Kitty (kitty, right?) LIVES for the moment. AGAIN, it painted a really funny (AND REALLY CUTE) image in my mind.
ronshaberry 2005-10-19 . chapter 4
Hah. This was delightful. The last line gave me a funny image of the clay flowers and a sculpture of a bird shaking their heads haughtily as they look out of a window. Hee... your writing really takes me back to my memories of my old house, and backyard...
ronshaberry 2005-10-19 . chapter 3
Ah now. This is good again. It really captures something, and even though I THINK you're talking about a cactus, it really gives off a different image. It has a nice aura, sense... of smugness... or awe?
ronshaberry 2005-10-19 . chapter 2
This is, again, good. I could, again, picture this quite well. The last line, Gold is worth nothing, really seems to add to it. The snapshot caught in the quiet tranquility, etc. etc. Good job.
ronshaberry 2005-10-19 . chapter 1
Short and sweet, good job! I like chicken rice. This painted a really nice image in my mind, and the use of "Daddy" really added, I think.
tii jay 2005-10-05 . chapter 5
? your leg's vampire... a dog? lol, i don't know about you but my dog attacks my feet. so i'm just trying to compare. so, what exactly did that mean? tiger in the night, she likes the darkness... your legs vampire? confusing.
tii jay 2005-10-05 . chapter 4
okay, it took me a while to get this. i'm not too sure. so, the real things aren't as nice as the what's fake. i see. interesting, yet true. i favor this one.
tii jay 2005-10-05 . chapter 3
hmm... i see a story going along here. now i feel like writing. keep it up.
tii jay 2005-10-05 . chapter 2
hmm... i really like this one. although not like your other unique ones, it's still great.
tii jay 2005-10-05 . chapter 1
ahaha.. simple, comedic, and true. i see you're writing about the simple things. it's unique and i like it.
leben 2005-10-04 . chapter 1
hehehehehehe

so happy!
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