Cool...Your rhythm worked out so well... "Of words laced with bile" I liked the image I got with that...which might sound kind of twisted and/or gross...but oh well...Like I said...Yeah. Cool. Geat job and thanks for the reviews.

Love Lain

well, i've written hate poems, but none so graciously good job

keep writing!

THis is... this is good... Great rhyming, and the whole idea... Beautiful, beautiful. I'm glad I decided to peruse your site. _x