| Reviews for Rude Awakening |
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His Mercy's Waiting 2/15/08 . chapter 1I love this one! I think every teenage writer can relate. Favs Keep writing! |
Amavi 7/21/06 . chapter 1Everything you write has such a clear and true message, and I find that they all apply to me. |
sloppy firsts 12/8/05 . chapter 1haha :) i think every writer experiences this. we have all these amazing ideas floating around our heads and we are all pumped up to write, but then it hits you that tomorrow is another school day. oh the pains of high school. |
ronshaberry 10/9/05 . chapter 1This is great. I feel this way a lot... Not healthy, I know... But, okay. There's a lot of passion (to me) in this, or maybe you're just telling it to tell it, and I think the last line adds a dash of humour to it. It's good, to be sure. Were you rhyming? I think.. you were... Or maybe it's just a really odd coincidence. The first two lines have some pretty awesome rhythm in them. Cheers! Keep writing. But then again, I don't need to tell you that. _x |
mizu no kokoro 10/5/05 . chapter 1lol i feel the same school, big pain in the ass good poem keep writing! |