Nice poem. I love the phrase - "forever is finite"

Great poem, I really love it!

Keep writing!

Amazing poem. I love it!

Very cool, there's a lot of energy that you can just feel.

Very catchy. Nice job capturing emotion.

This is good, great work! I like it

Wow, short but deep. Oh and that poem is yet another stupid tragedy that has happened to me. *sigh* It never ends does it?

It's easier to first read the italics, then read the normal text. Cause the first time I read it I got a bit confused...heh...goes to show how stupid I really am.. :D awesome poem, even though it's short.

-freak from the corner

I like this. Its short but it works really very well.

you write too much! bloody hell.. over 100 things! where do you get the time?

Kick-ass work

i unno... i didn't find that it felt like 2 poems.. but maybe thats cus i dun really know your style. I thought it flowed really well..

don't quite know what to think...but it is interesting...in a good way...lol