This is beautyful!Very work!

Stunning! Starting in media res just drops you in (well done), and then gives you three clean images on different scales - the whole sweep of the sea, the tiny person swimming, and an unseen "you". And you do something I always love - present a single image very well. You have definite talent - nicely done!

Thank you for your reviews. They cheered me right up after a crappy day.

a simply beautiful poem