wow, this is REALLY good. i like it. its very descriptive yet flows nicely.

Cool, awesome write.

Awesome!! I REALLY loved the one description, especially: "Brown turned crimson,/ At light’s gentle kiss." That wording was... Wow. Completely ingenious.

a.k.a. You're awesome.:-D -- J.max

p.s. Thanks for your review of "Rock," by the way:-) Haha - go ahead and share it with people, if you seriously want to. (I feel honored:-P)

It's a very nice poem. I love the fact your inspiration was your cats eyes.

That's sweet.

Very descriptive. I love it!