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Damaged 2007-01-11 ch 28,	abuse^_^ Excellent three chapters! I am so excited to see that you are picking this story up again! And wow..I can't believe that Damien is picking now, of all times, to reappear in Dria's life! That's insane!! And, I must say, you gave me a heartattack when Dominic didn't show. Wow!!
Catari 2007-01-10 ch 28,	abuseok i totally love this story! its really fun to read. keep writing, i wanna see what happens! i do have a couple of suggestions though... its a little confusing in the last couple of chapters when you mix up Dominics name with Damiens. I knew what you meant, but still. also, in chapter 28 Dominic calls Dria Baby but earlier only Damien calls her that. keep up the good work!
invizygirl 2006-03-22 ch 25,	abuseaww luv the baby's name. great chapter.
Damaged 2006-03-03 ch 25,	abuseExcellent two chapters!! I'm still curious to see what'll happen with Damien, if anything at all in the future. Keep up your gorgeous writing! I'm so glad that Dominic is making Dria so happy! And I LOVED the "knight in shining armor" add!! Precious!
Damaged 2006-02-27 ch 23,	abuseWow. I'm totally left speechless after these twenty-two chapters. You have such power in your words. At first when I began reading, I wanted to submit a review saying "Add detail -- try to add length to the chapters to hush up the confusion" but now I'm glad I didn't. If anymore detail had been added, I think I'd have either thrown up or broken down into tears. What you've described is every LDS girl's worries. I mean, that chapter when Dominic comes home and she feels so unworthy --"used merchandise"--really hit home for me. Awesome. You have so much talent! Update soon!! I can't wait to see whether or not Damien will come back into the story and try to mess it up with Dominic. And, if so, what will Dominic do?
Damaged 2006-02-27 ch 9,	abuseWow! So far this story is really intense! Damien sounds like such a perve! Wow! Anyways, I really relate to this chapter. Two years IS a long time. I sympathize for Dria...and, of course, for the authorette! winks But, I hear that the two years go by quickly. I know, you've probably heard that million times by now, but it's what's helping me get through MY two years. LOL. Anyways, I'm going to go finish reading your story. Au revoir!
Damaged 2006-02-21 ch 1,	abuseOoh! I love this beginning! I'd continue reading the rest of the 23 chapters, but I'm out of time right now. I promise, though, I'll be back to read this! I wonder who Damien is and what the story between him and Dria are ... how intriguing! I look forward to reading more. Au revoir, mon amie!
Mrs.Scarlet102.0 2006-02-19 ch 23,	abuseu use dominic and Damien, who does she call?? I am confused. But, other than that it was a great Chapter. Longer chapters would be appreciated. Bibi!
invizygirl 2006-02-17 ch 23,	abusegreat story so far. glad to see things going better for dria. luv her name by the way. Alexandria is my sister's name. great writing!
Nyte Shade 2006-02-16 ch 23,	abuseThis is really good still but you mixed up Damien and Dominic i think.
eyes hold the key to my hea... 2006-01-24 ch 22,	abuseMORE! THIS IS AWESOME~
eyes hold the key to my hea... 2006-01-24 ch 13,	abuseDude! This is kinda whacked up...
Mrs.Scarlet101.5 2006-01-21 ch 22, anon.	abuseplease make another chapter!! this story is awesome!
MrsScarlet101.5 2006-01-19 ch 22, anon.	abuseOMG! please make another chapter! the suspence is me!
Opal Fairy 2006-01-17 ch 18,	abuseI do like this story but I feel its a bit rushed. because of that i can't understand how Dria loves Damian and why she's agreed to marry him and all this stuff. the whole story leaves so many questions. Your like me you just want to get on with the story and get everything happening but because this your kinda skimping on important thougths that explain Dria's choices. i hope this helpful its just reading it I don't understand why Dria loves him or anything. Opal Fairy

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