I read fast, so it may take me a moment to diges and to a real comment...I love it! My God, you're good. Symbolic and excellent use of language. I don't care one way or another for sympolic meanings and picking apart stories for meanings that aren't even there, but I thought it would be a nice thing to point out. Adore Xerox, by the way.

I really like this, it's do deep and fragile.

so haunting and so beautiful. could have made me cry.

beautiful. just simply beautiful.

~* noelle

I loved the imagery...the subtle rhymes..It all flowed very well. I love it a lot.

Um. Very abstract. I didn't really get it.

But it was nice anyways.

I liked the line

This beating heart that whispers your name swears that,”It shall never rain here.”

I really like this; its has a strange kind of power to it that really stuck out in my mind. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.