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| amathest 2005-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseUrm, oh, and...eh. Not too good. |
| AntiChompist 2005-10-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was an interesting little tale. I was not too fon dof the language though. It seems a tad pointless. |