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Reviews For: Two Teens and a Baby

Maxegirl1313
2008-04-20
ch 3,
abuseupdate soon!

my parents are divorced too, i hope its not that upsetting!
incandescente
2006-10-20
ch 3,
abuseyour author note crushed me. donovan dont want her? why?! haha. i really thought it was the 'i like her so i show it by teasing her' syndrome. anyway, do continue writing! i really like this story.
FunkeeMunky
2006-09-26
ch 3,
abuseoh, I like it, youre a very good writer. I'll be keeping a look-out for the update.
goodbyemylover
2006-09-25
ch 3,
abusewow, great chapter. deffinitely worth the wait. i do not like patrick at ALL! god, what a jerk. and btw, im sorry about your parents. update soon, you're a great writer!
zah
2006-09-25
ch 3,
abusegr8 keep on writting
rockrose
2006-09-24
ch 3,
abuseGreat story! I hope you update it soon.

I'm really anxious to read about the project! And I hope she dumps Pat soon!
goodbyemylover
2006-06-07
ch 2,
abusehey, i just read your story, it has a really great plot! i noticed you haven't updated since january, i was just wondering if you are going to keep going with it cause i really like it!
Cama
2006-01-16
ch 1,
abuseI like the way this is going and the Title really got my attention!!Keep it going...
christine daae
2006-01-16
ch 2, anon.
abusegood story! seems like donvan has a crush on her!
C. Aleshi
2006-01-16
ch 2,
abuse=) I love it! Good to hear that the most popular girl in the school, Tiffany isnt like those cliche ones, about them being ** and stuff. =)I like Brett better than Patrick though... Patrick's... hm.. over protective (sorta selfish and bossy)..Donovan is so EVIL! lol.. roaches! ew!Update soon!

--IP.
FireBad.TreePretty
2006-01-15
ch 1,
abusei like it, continue and cant wait to read more :)
B.Laures
2005-10-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good! Kep up with the writing!-Briette Julienne Laures-
ceesthepanda
2005-10-05
ch 1,
abuse=)
Shorty Baby
2005-10-05
ch 1,
abuseI like it so far but you got to stick on top of it!! yay! Have fun hope to hear from you soon!
AzaLea
2005-10-05
ch 1, anon.
abusehayy! This is an awesome-licious story! My, Donovan sounds like a bit of a jerk, doesn't he? I like the name "Brooke" and this story caught my attention throughout. Keep uup the good job!
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