This poem is sad yet the feelings are beautiful. I like how in the list line it's like you're moking his Mohawk; I'll probably look at them in a new light now...

EB

i love the emotion here, its so real, so vibrant! Excellent work, keep writing!

i love this.

dead raccoon?

amusing and tragic

not really in an ophelia way..the kind of tragedy that no one notices. ) well that's the impression i got and i love how you focused on it subtly.

great job

I like the whole mohawk thing.. great poem... I like it a lot... the ending is great

I've been here before. Well done on this piece!

Really nice. Never read a poem about mohawk before.

Mohawks are awesome! I really liked this one also. Please read and review.