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| cyberspyder1 2005-10-19 ch 1,   | I still love the imagery of the sword and the Diamond mask. I have to admit I really like this poem. |
| itsonlyme07 2005-10-05 ch 1, | I love how you used a blade and its sides to explain the pain you will have to go through. I also loved the part about the strong mask made of diamonds. Good Job |
| deeper-meanings21 2005-10-05 ch 1, | wow...this is a great example of how something should be written. It has so much detail. It really paints the picture. I loved it! Great job! Please keep writing! |