Wow; what utter dreck we've got here.

Here's a tip: don't confine yourself to rhyme schemes and meter. It makes your poems seem generic. Also, ironically enough, writing your poem in such a stereotypical style kind of undermines its own meaning - you spoke of Americans as being carbon-copies of each other, so you hammered out a piece of carbon-copy poetry. Nice.

Think for yourself. It really works.

This one made me laugh. It's so true but no one comments on it. I'm not fond of 'political' poetry if you see what I mean, but this one I liked!