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Reviews For: Inside Your Jungle

Wogan May
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseSeems contextually inconsistent to me. Jungles are confusing, scary places. I would have written this differently.
Arkash
2005-11-30
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful poem, full of feelings.

Well done!! *_*
mizu no kokoro
2005-10-18
ch 1,
abusethe rhyming in this made it very consistent~ good work!

keep writing!
Princess Hannah
2005-10-07
ch 1,
abuseNeats! I've never heard a jungle used as a metaphor for love before.
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