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| Wogan May 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseSeems contextually inconsistent to me. Jungles are confusing, scary places. I would have written this differently. |
| Arkash 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem, full of feelings. Well done!! *_* |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-10-18 ch 1, | abusethe rhyming in this made it very consistent~ good work! keep writing! |
| Princess Hannah 2005-10-07 ch 1, | abuseNeats! I've never heard a jungle used as a metaphor for love before. |