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Citharia
2005-10-22
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosh. This is awesome.

Seriously, I love the way you portrayed the bomber. His POV is really warped, and kind of disturbed, yet has a sane rationality to him. He really seems to think that he's doing the right thing, and honestly, the way you wrote about his final moments of his life was fantastic.

"The button is pressed, and the last thing I feel is searing, tortuous pain, as though my internal organs are being ripped out by a minute knife, and the last thing I know of is my smiling face, and the screaming crowds." Wow. Climatic ending.

Very very powerful. Maybe you should send this to the suicide bombers in those terrorist organisations. ^^ just kidding! GOOD JOB! =)
zhihua
2005-10-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseheehee...suspicious articles*snigger* can't wait till the hols...sigh :)*Whe! I like prose!!* Do write a story!! I'm still waiting for my one day series...
Lana Mira Beth
2005-10-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is awesome. Seriously, it's going to my favourite's list. It was well detailed, but not over-done. Instead of the inflection of the bomber coming off as a crazed lunatic, despite his reasoning (which was fabulous, so kudos for that!), he came off as very poised and sober, making his thoughts all the more threatening. Great job! :)
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