 first-casualty-of-war 2006-08-16 . chapter 1Pretty spiffy. Wonderful imagery, and very deep. Keep it up =) |
 Minerva Gray 2006-03-03 . chapter 1I liked this! I feel I can relate to this in some way I don't actually understand. But very, very good. I loved your word choice. Nice job. |
 Yuffei 2006-02-18 . chapter 1Whao. That really spoke to me, which is a rare event. =] I like it, and your work in general for that matter. Keep writing. ^^ |
 Luna*Moony*Scamp 2006-01-18 . chapter 1O_O; Wow...just wow...Loved it. |
 Alisha Marie 2006-01-06 . chapter 1Nice poem..sad feelings come from it. |
 setne 2005-11-06 . chapter 1I was quite impressed when I read this poem. It's like you've been writing all your life. Keep on going!
(P.S.: Thank you for your previous review of one of my poems!) |
 Zefskiy 2005-10-20 . chapter 1Whoa. That's cool.
Sorry for the vague comment, but it's getting late... |
 Hez 2005-10-20 . chapter 1I like it...
Sometimes I wonder if happiness really is more than a facade. And even if it is, and no one's truly happy... isn't the facade enough?
That was unrelated. Good poem. |
 i hOld tHe kEys oF lifE 2005-10-10 . chapter 1deep poem.. im not sure I get it... but then agin im borrible at interpreting poetry..But if you wrote it on a sugar high it must not be a depressed poem? Rite?
PS.. thanks for the review... i thought that about ** too.. i always thought that some ppls poems are just too long... but I learned through experience that sometimes a poem is ment to be long and sometimes they're ment to be short...
PSS.. ha ha... you seem to have talent... I have a story up called crack and another one called help me (i wrote it a long time ago so its horrible no lie but I think the plot is good) yeah but I think you would enjoy them... and im the same as you... i R&R those that review me...
..aleX |
 Moon-Chaser 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Interesting use of the english language. I love the sound of this poem.
Keep it up.
Thanks for reviewinf. |
 Jen calculates 2005-10-07 . chapter 1I love the ends of both stanzas..and I thikn I know what you're saying. I won't try to explain it in words because it would come out sounding like a whole load of pretentious crap, but I think I get it.
Love the title too, might have to steal it sometime..
~ Jen |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-10-06 . chapter 1Well, that was interesting^^ i especially liked how you used paradise and then parasite~ quite the paradox in an odd way^^~
keep writing! |
 soft-spoken 2005-10-06 . chapter 1wow, i love this.I can't even describe how I love it... or why. It just has great description and imagery.awesome job! this is going in my favourites.
Nousha* |