Pretty spiffy. Wonderful imagery, and very deep. Keep it up )

I liked this! I feel I can relate to this in some way I don't actually understand. But very, very good. I loved your word choice. Nice job.

Whao. That really spoke to me, which is a rare event. ] I like it, and your work in general for that matter. Keep writing.

O_O; Wow...just wow...Loved it.

Nice poem..sad feelings come from it.

I was quite impressed when I read this poem. It's like you've been writing all your life. Keep on going!

(P.S.: Thank you for your previous review of one of my poems!)

Whoa. That's cool.

Sorry for the vague comment, but it's getting late...

I like it...

Sometimes I wonder if happiness really is more than a facade. And even if it is, and no one's truly happy... isn't the facade enough?

That was unrelated. Good poem.

deep poem.. im not sure I get it... but then agin im borrible at interpreting poetry..But if you wrote it on a sugar high it must not be a depressed poem? Rite?

PS.. thanks for the review... i thought that about shit too.. i always thought that some ppls poems are just too long... but I learned through experience that sometimes a poem is ment to be long and sometimes they're ment to be short...

PSS.. ha ha... you seem to have talent... I have a story up called crack and another one called help me (i wrote it a long time ago so its horrible no lie but I think the plot is good) yeah but I think you would enjoy them... and im the same as you... i R&R those that review me...

..aleX

Interesting use of the english language. I love the sound of this poem.

Keep it up.

Thanks for reviewinf.

I love the ends of both stanzas..and I thikn I know what you're saying. I won't try to explain it in words because it would come out sounding like a whole load of pretentious crap, but I think I get it.

Love the title too, might have to steal it sometime..

Jen

Well, that was interesting i especially liked how you used paradise and then parasite quite the paradox in an odd way

keep writing!

wow, i love this.I can't even describe how I love it... or why. It just has great description and job! this is going in my favourites.

Nousha*