| Reviews for Victims of Paradise |
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first-casualty-of-war 8/16/06 . chapter 1Pretty spiffy. Wonderful imagery, and very deep. Keep it up ) |
Minerva Gray 3/3/06 . chapter 1I liked this! I feel I can relate to this in some way I don't actually understand. But very, very good. I loved your word choice. Nice job. |
Yuffei 2/18/06 . chapter 1Whao. That really spoke to me, which is a rare event. ] I like it, and your work in general for that matter. Keep writing. |
LunaMoonyScamp 1/18/06 . chapter 1O_O; Wow...just wow...Loved it. |
Alisha Marie 1/6/06 . chapter 1Nice poem..sad feelings come from it. |
setne 11/6/05 . chapter 1I was quite impressed when I read this poem. It's like you've been writing all your life. Keep on going! (P.S.: Thank you for your previous review of one of my poems!) |
Zefskiy 10/20/05 . chapter 1Whoa. That's cool. Sorry for the vague comment, but it's getting late... |
Hez 10/20/05 . chapter 1I like it... Sometimes I wonder if happiness really is more than a facade. And even if it is, and no one's truly happy... isn't the facade enough? That was unrelated. Good poem. |
envy me 10/10/05 . chapter 1deep poem.. im not sure I get it... but then agin im borrible at interpreting poetry..But if you wrote it on a sugar high it must not be a depressed poem? Rite? PS.. thanks for the review... i thought that about shit too.. i always thought that some ppls poems are just too long... but I learned through experience that sometimes a poem is ment to be long and sometimes they're ment to be short... PSS.. ha ha... you seem to have talent... I have a story up called crack and another one called help me (i wrote it a long time ago so its horrible no lie but I think the plot is good) yeah but I think you would enjoy them... and im the same as you... i R&R those that review me... ..aleX |
Moon-Chaser 10/9/05 . chapter 1Interesting use of the english language. I love the sound of this poem. Keep it up. Thanks for reviewinf. |
Jen calculates 10/7/05 . chapter 1I love the ends of both stanzas..and I thikn I know what you're saying. I won't try to explain it in words because it would come out sounding like a whole load of pretentious crap, but I think I get it. Love the title too, might have to steal it sometime.. Jen |
mizu no kokoro 10/6/05 . chapter 1Well, that was interesting i especially liked how you used paradise and then parasite quite the paradox in an odd way keep writing! |
soft-spoken 10/6/05 . chapter 1wow, i love this.I can't even describe how I love it... or why. It just has great description and job! this is going in my favourites. Nousha* |