Wow...that's crazy, like, I can just picture every little thing and it all seems beautiful, you know? It's really well written, and I really like it. Keep it up!

aww this poem is so sad..i get it now bc you explained it to me in lunch when i read it

sends a chill down my spine that makes me shiver in this unbearable heat. ur very talented

Very nice. A little long for my taste and it almost seemed a little more like a story than a poem, but that doesn't really matter, because I liked it anyway. Write on!

Lunchi