I love it! I like all your poems, I just normally don't log in and Review stuff.

I love this.. I can totally relate.. great job.. well done

Wow. I think you did an incrediable job of explaining this. Please read and review.

Great stream of thought, thought progression and word association. "Erase/ Rebuild". Those words run on tangents of one another, but I see what they mean. That's really interesting. If you were dull, you would have wrote, "Erase/Rewrite". Something to that effect. And I think you mean the actual verb, to breathe. *Breathe in.

Nice, crisp piece, though.