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| Iva Verde 2006-03-26 ch 1,   | I like you blended poverty and history together. Very good imagery, touching and I especially liked the introduction and conclusion. You have a way of drawing the reader in. |
| DisturbedKittenWriter 2006-03-26 ch 1, | O! Very nice! This piece is very descriptive and the sentences flow together nicely. Good job! Again, I enjoyed this *round of applause* |
| Wings As Eagles 2005-10-12 ch 1, | THis is very ... interesting. A good take on poverty and how it can drive a person insane. I would like to know more of the political background of the country at that time...we get a good taste of the man, but I wonder somehow what it was that drove him over the brink. |