Powerful imagery.I love how you say 'the horses rage on' because of the double meaning.

Wow this is great too! The imagery is so mind blowing and I love how you use black horses and anger together. Beautiful! QueenVixta

Hey ya Hawke! I know I havent been reviewing your work in a while but I've just been so busy...(lame excuse, I know) But its the truth..So I'm sorry..I'll try and keep up ok?

So this poem..I really like the idea...raging horses..Very original, never read anything like it! So great job on this and I love it!

Much love, Rosanna.

Wow! Impressive imagery and just...wow! *stares in awe* Great piece!