This was a truly beautiful story, with compelling characters.

Not only was it wonderfully written, the emotion and details are portrayed exceptionally well, plus, much like your other stories, it seems very personal and nostalgic.

I actually just finished writing a story that seems sort of similar to this one. Hope you get a chance to read it when it's posted.

Keep up the great writing!

xoxo Aly

Wonderful. . oh wow, I loved this! It reminds me a lot of my relationship. . You have a real talent--please continue writing!

Hey! Your story is so wonderful! Its short, sweet and I love it. Its pointless to have a sequel to it since all romance stories today are only showing how their affection to each other grew together. I love the way you portrayed it. Its just mild and full of emotions and their is hardly an lust and I like that. You did a great job Yogi, I'm gonna certainly add this to my favourites list =).

You should be pleased with this story, it's beautiful! I absolutely love it! I sort of think it's cool how you only put their names at the end. Anyway, I absolutely love it, great work!