I really love the way you write. I've read your stuff before...over on the sister site...and I think you are just incredible.
The mood of this one really fits the song. In fact, I read it again with the song playing and it just hit me full force. I love the way you've described them in each other's arms with the rain outside. You've got a beautiful way with words. Its a wonderful little counterpart for Moby's song. I loved it.