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| BrownEyedBeauty 2007-06-11 ch 27,  | abuseNice story. Is this the end, or are you going to finish it? If so, update soon, please!! =D |
| awaitinglove 2007-02-17 ch 27, | abuseThis would have been a story that I would have definately been interested in, but 1) the main character was too annoying, 2) you don't fall in love with someone after having like a two minute conversation, 3) it dragged on so I scanned through it before I got fed up. The only thing that really surprised me was that Halden (or whatever his name is) kept getting up in the morning to reopen his wounds. I guess I should applaud you on that. |
| youpin 2006-12-24 ch 1, | abuseGood story. |
| Mimerz 2006-08-31 ch 27, | abuseI don't know why you don't have more reviews. This is a great story! Don't quit on it! |
| Elidhu 2006-06-14 ch 27, | abuseBrilliant story i loved every bit of it XBethX |
| Tu Morrow 2006-05-21 ch 27, | abuseThat what was a very good story. Like a said before, take some time to proofread stories because there were a few spelling and grammar errors. But other than that, twas nice! |
| Tu Morrow 2006-05-21 ch 17, | abuseOMG! This story just keeps getting better and better! I shall read on! |
| Tu Morrow 2006-05-21 ch 2, | abuseOh, I think I know who he is... Really interesting so far. There are a few grammar errors that proofreading could fix. |
| Tu Morrow 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseSo far, so good. I wonder what she has planned for him and viceversa. |
| Chloee Phantom 2006-02-12 ch 27, | abuseUPDATE!! I like it! PLease update VERY VERY soon! |
| Deafgurl's world 2006-02-06 ch 27, | abuseHey! Wow! I cant wait to find what happens next. How cute twins that Christine had. How wonderful that Jacquin alive. How happily they are on way to his father's house. I gladly Christine is safe now with her fiance and her children. Hurry update soon. |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2006-02-05 ch 27, | abuseAww... Update! |
| aslimegreenasalemon 2006-02-04 ch 27, | abuseoh to awesome. I lvoe it... is it over? I hope not! either way bravo! |
| A Dark White Rose 2006-02-04 ch 27, | abuseawsome chpt. please update soon i wish u luck on your writing! |
| mortediamore 2006-02-04 ch 26, | abuseaww, she's going into labour, she's gonna have the babies *dies of excitement* and he's there to see the birth... |