Wow, just wow. This is interesting, unique, and well-written. It's cliche with a twist, and I love it. You have an interesting idea going, and I'd like to see what you'll do with it. Update soon!

me like so far ^^ please update soon!!

Poor angel T.T;; Love your writing ^^

By teh way, is teh story "station" complete?

Wow. I tell you what, WOW! *starts clicking the favorite button madly* Very, very nice! *waggles eyebrows* VERY nice! Awsome! Very much enjoyed, very much yes! *is incoherent due to stupor and glee* Update very soon, please do! This is just lovely!

this is sounding good! XD its hot! more details would be nice!! and update!! yay!

good job. very descriptive language and vivid scenes.

Oh man, that was amazing. It should be made into an anime. I love your characters; they seem so beautiful. I've always wanted to write something like this, but I've never had the time to create such an intricate world and such detailed characters.

One mistake you made that cracked me up: "They fought gorilla tactics." You spelled it like the animal gorilla, but you need the military term "guerilla". You might want to check a dictionary anyway just in case.

Nice job. I can't wait to read more!