Oh my,it's very original.I love it!I am always intrigued by dark romances.
*Favourite*

I tend to avoid things about vampires becuase they're so overused in fiction, but this is well done and deserves recognition. Also, is the prase "Monnunluelue saropueel deetahninkeylee" from any language, or did you just come up with that?

excellent! dude, this is awesome. A very touching story of love, and about vampires, vampires rock. **clicks to add to favorite authors list**

wow! You truly did an amazing job. Im having a hard time wrapping my mind around. Nicely done!

bein immortal and your love not sucks. Nice poem

This song is really good, the message is deep. Well done.