   les petits bateaux 2005-10-16 . chapter 1Beautiful with a sense of warmth. Good job.
~~Trinity |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Cool night, carress the skin. |
 The Postscript 2005-10-07 . chapter 1Hmm...peaceful. Good to see more of your work posted. Keep writing. |
 ronshaberry 2005-10-07 . chapter 1Again, great haiku. To be able to do things with haikus... such an art. I could never be able to do that. Hopefully... someday... Maybe. |
 Faithless Juliet 2005-10-07 . chapter 1Beautiful detail and emotion. I loved it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet. |
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