   sloppy firsts 2005-12-17 . chapter 1pure magic. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Soothing and full of assurance. |
 M. R. Smale 2005-10-09 . chapter 1Very powerful and beautiful in such a short piece. It is amazing how haikus can do that so well. Keep up the great work! |
 mizu no kokoro 2005-10-08 . chapter 1yes... and wiht all the hopes in the world~ good work
keep writing! |
 The Postscript 2005-10-07 . chapter 1Beautiful. I like that...the first line is darkness...but the last line is light. Keep it up. God bless, Katja. |
 ronshaberry 2005-10-07 . chapter 1Beatiful. Really. I loved it. Great job! ^_^x |
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