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| eighteen hundred 2005-10-08 ch 1,  | abuseThis is pretty good, I think, even if the subject matter is kind of, as you said, silly. It flowed very well, one line into the next, and had a very playful, sing-song tone which worked very well with the content. Nice piece. |