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| Als 2006-11-29 ch 1,  | I like it. I really like the rhymes. I'm not exactly sure what it was about, or who it was about, but oh well. I really love the line "Except this feeling’s too high and I’m afraid of heights". It's really cool. Luv ya, ~Als |
| vballgurl154 2005-10-08 ch 1,  | I love this- especially the first 4 lines. great job! hey, whats your screen name? ~Kristee~ |
| Seth Triskellion 2005-10-08 ch 1, | ... the song is good, really good. But I'm left wondering what it means. Is it about me? Because... I dunoo. The song was good, let's just leave it at that. |
| Nimnengil Parmanole 2005-10-08 ch 1, | i know it's hard, but just hang in there. sooner or later everything has to make sense. |
| darkpaladin13 2005-10-08 ch 1, | Very good job of writing. It flows well together, has a good emotional impact and makes me feel . . .good work |