Wah! I got the Monty Python thing and cracked up! ^^

Wow, so it's taken me like two days to get through this whole story... and then... it starts getting SUPER SUPER SUPER interesting... AND IT STOPS! Hasn't been updated since July 08!! Dude. College can't be kicking your ass THAT hard!!

Anyways dude(tte, but really I call everyone dude) You've gotta update!! I can't stand not knowing! And BIKO!! Is back! For some reason I don't think I caught that during the scene with Nikko and Biko in the bed at the party, although I kind of did, I didn't really realize that the puppy was ACTUALLY Biko, I thought Nikko was being delusional. Anyways.
I want to know what REALLY happened when Biko got killed because it's starting to sound like Dimitri didn't really do it or something, and that everyone jumped to conclusions. Except, it kind of had to be Dimitri didn't it? He turned into a black witch and you have to kill your familiar to be a black witch. I want to know what Biko means about Nikko jumping to conclusions!

So, yeah. I will be waiting patiently for an update, because I WANT TO FIND OUT!

Okay, when I said patiently, I didn't really mean it. It will be more of an impatient, terrible, exhausting wait. But. You probably know how that goes.

... neat... and distracting me from my homework. So it's perfect :)

I love this story!!
Holy...hell...It's been a year woman!! UPDATE!

Please? Pretty Please?
I swear if you don't I'll...Hunt you down and hold you hostage with a sharp object, until you do!

PLEASE!

For some reason, I really, really want more RhianxDawn. Fav pairing.

UPDATE! I don't care if you're getting paid to write something else, you just can't leave us hanging here! D:

whoa...this is an intense story. I've been reading it on and off for about a week now and I love it and the charicters a lot. Please update soon.

Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I think this is easily one of the best-written stories here. I couldn't stop reading it after discovering it (while looking for smutty M-rated slash stories *blush*), and now here I am, 4 days and 33 chapters later (I read slow) craving more. Yeah, I thought maybe the development between Dawn and Shasta took forever, and for a while I thought how much it deviated from the summary. But then I realized that this story was, for some reason or other, just not centered on the lead characters' relationship, and I just accepted it as is, and now I'm hooked! And that's saying a lot since there are hardly any Rated M moments. Lol! :)

Oh, before I forget, I guess I must have missed it or something, but where is Titania? How come she didn't go with Jazz and the others on their 'epic adventure'?

Well, in any case, please keep updating this story. It's awesome!

P.S.
Are we gonna see more interaction (romantic or otherwise) between Dawn and Rhian? I feel like what happened between them was never really resolved. I mean, they haven't really hashed it out through to the end after Rhian admits to himself that he actually enjoyed what happened between him and Dawn, what with the sudden bout of kidnapping leads and all. And I guess that's understandable seeing as how his daughter (I'm guessing) is a victim. But I would so love if Rhian starts falling for Dawn (or maybe just wants to do the nasty with him again)! Because I live for those kinds of romantic entanglement dramas (of which love triangles and unrequited loves are a part of), so bite me. Lol. XD

how do you come up with all of these ideas! This story is amazing. Keep it up.

YOU ARE LIKE THE AWESOMEST!

This story is awesome! It has everything that i like: fantasy, magic, magical creatures, slash... I know it's kinda improbable that you would update this, but if you ever ever come back, PLEASE do update this. I'll love you forever! Again, this story is really awesome, the plot is good, the romance is good and it's just the best story I've read on fictionpress. Thanks for the great read, and do please update if you can.

Aw man, this is such an amazing story... However I really enjoy the toaster story... This is actually Bloodfeder in disguise... my email stopped working so I had to create a new account... ANYWAYS I'm so gonna reread this. It's awesome and deserv4es to be read.
B

I absolutely love this story and I do hope you finish it.

I haven't read this story, nor have I looked up any of the reviews which leaves me with the odds of seeming like an obnoxious, ignorant fool. But I read your story summary once and something just bugged me a little - "Dawn" and "Don" are both pretty much the same names, but the difference between them is that "Dawn" is the female version of the name and "Don" is the male version.

In your summary, is said that "Dawn" was a guy and that just seemed inproper. I know that you're the author and can make everything a certain way, but my name is "Dawn" also. I am a girl. And people have always mistakeningly wrote my name as "Don" which is the incorrect version which always got on my nerves and quickly became a personal pet peeve of mine.

Sorry that I'm all ranting and no consideration but I'm still half-asleep and I hope that you can understand. lol

To be continued when?!?!?!?!? What happens next?