I really love your story, its depressing, but then again, I'm a little depressed. Its amazing how you can describe whats happening whens she's falling. It's like you've done it before.

i liked it

WowThat was interesting.All I can say is it was wonderful.

Wow, that's pretty unique. I'm not sure I understand the beginning or how exactly this rolls out, but it clearly conveys a feeling of freedom. Touchy topic, but a good point.