That is so wrong, making Andrew die like that, I demand you to write a story about him and how after death he bacame a ghost and somehow finds Di and all that gushy 'happy' stuff.

o0o0o some sappy gay love! awe!

omg! poor elizabeth... talkin about a twist in the story!

heehee!

i dunt think i found spelling errors... lol this is great so far... heehee!

hehhe! o0o0 oI LOVE ANDREW ALREADY! haha

oh shit!

o0o yeah.. keagan sounds righteous... lol

I loved this so far... and wow... wonder where he can get a girlfriend...? hehee!!

It's kind of annoying after reading a sad ending to be told in the authors notes that it should have made us cry. Just fyi.

Aw ;.; its so cute..yet sad, yet good its like a giant milkshake, all the different elements you used to make it. Overall it was very yummy ^^...i mean good... good job ^^

whywhywhhwhywhywhy wpould you do that to us! I just read the whole thing- it was so good, but thought it would have a HAPPY ending- i guess there was a bit of hope- but just why :( he was your favourite character as well!ok, just a few hints n grammar etc- (sorry if other people have already told you)It is awlays 'I'd HAVE done that', not 'I'd OF done that'. And there were a couple of mix ups with 'off' and 'of'- but you did say you were doing it in a rush and i thought the story was brilliant anyway :) Its just crazy- i found you through the search engine and saw your list of fictions- i cannot believe you've written over eighty stories- that is UNBELIEVABLE! I'm so impressed.Good luck with the rest!

Why Andrew, he was awesome. Now I'm going to cry. Nice story though, Keagan's cool

OMG! I'm sitting here crying. That was so sad! I will never understand why there is cruelty like that in the world. I realise and accept that there is cruelty I just don't know why. Most people would probably think that parents would never do that to their children but they do. How could she as a mother be so cold and cruel? She practically murdered two of her three children! I've been crying since I read the last part of your story. It was truly powerful and moving

I thought it was a great ending, so don't beat yourself up about it, lol