Whoop. And err.

~Raven

great.

~Raven Lunatic

K, still readin' and still likin'.

I continue. And on!

~Raven Lunatic (this has been my net name for 5 months, so don't think i stole it.)

yeah well, t's good.

I'm gonna keep reading. And uh, yeah that Robin character is, at least to say, O.o there is no word. Insane?Yeah, that. But you already said that.

~Raven

I can't tell if you'd want a real review on this or not. o.o Oh well, I guess I'll just give you some constructive criticism.

First off, there is no punctuation at all. I mean, there are some periods, question marks, and exclamation points, but where are the commas? Where are the semi-colons? Where are the apostrophes? The story itself doesn't flow very well either, but I suppose that's okay, since it's just supposed to be amusing.

I do, however, have a few things that I absolutely love about this. I love how you opened with Alice narrating, giving the basic background to her therapist. Great way to incorporate it into the story. I also love Robin. OMG, he can have my babies. Though, the random splooging, jizzing, and ** is just kinda ... weird. There are ways of making it actually fit into the story without it being downright "AND HE EXPLODED HIS NASTY WHITE HOT MAN SEED ALL OVER THE FLOOR!11one". I don't know. I just found that to be ... wierd. ^^;

It sucks! Lol, jk! This roxz! It was definetly cool and update soon or else I'll shoot you! :) (I didn't say jk)!

Dude that ** rocked, update soon! that was the best story ever!

Wow, really good! I totally liked it and I like the pen name change.