Nicely written! :)

I happen to really like it a lot. I like that it leaves the reader wondering...

GREAT JOB!

Interesting. It sounds a bit vague...I'm unsure as to what's going on, but then, that's the nature of the poem. I feel as if more description could be added - have you tried writing it in prose? That might work better. The way you've related the poem doesn't sound quite poetic enough... Anyway, out of curiosity (duh), was this poem based on a dream?