You create both the scene and the mood well. The descriptions here are exquisite. Very much creates a natural scene that blends itself with a hint of fantasy well. Reminds me of many Irish poems that show a great deal of respect for nature and humanities place in it. I appreciate all your reviews, and if you get the chance can you read some of my older stuff from the beginning and comment, I think some of those may be better. Good work here. Very thourough and a lovely image made.

spammage? how could u degrade yourself in such a way? this is really awesome, especially the paragraph about the sunlight. "eternal fireflies..."

Wow! Very great indeed. I love poetic things like this - there really isn't any other way to describe it. Unfortunately, I cannot write like that myself so I must feast of the imaginations of others. Q.O.B

Oh, if you would be so kind as to drop by my story...I am having trouble getting reviews. *sigh* You don't have to, but it would be appreciated. _

Cool, very nice. I guess the only thing that i thought was a bit wrong was the "purple" that u used in the first paragraph...maybe do "violet" instead...it just threw me off a bit i guess. jenny

Wow, this almost made the world seem good and nice. And then... DEAD AND DYING! W00T! I love how your ideas are always so original, and I think the dead memories mean: This place is the now.

But that's just me and my own spammage. _x