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| angelicdust 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abusethis one's very natural happens to everyone.. but in my case um.. i was da other.. but i wasn;t so harsh .. but she felt it all cause she wouldnt date anyone .. she had a problem and she was hyer and she screwed me for that,.. guess this was wat she was feeling .. but hey i used to talk to her for ages on da phone.. alas!< maybe it was him!... now its all ok.. we're all cleared up .. don wry!... u portrayed it damm well.. thnx-shail |
| boys kiss girls 2005-10-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is almost what my friends feel like saying to me I bet. I dont think I'm quite this bad though. This is very well written. Keep it up :) |
| ode to a firefly 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseYep, hit the nail on the head with this one! Amazing. :) ~Christine~ |
| Mr. Singh is back 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuseA very nice piece of poetry. Well rhymed and timed, and many people can relate to this one. Not good to ignore her. Don't be a pest, but for the love of god, do not ignore her. Nothing good will come of it. |
| lessons you learn 2005-10-10 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, you are my new best friend. I did exactly the same thing and she hates me now...-_- |
| Princess-anna57 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseA lot of people can relate to this, and that's good. ^_^ Good work, I like this poem. Keep writing! ^_^ ~Anna~ |