Interesting, I love how you tied in the Mona Lisa.

Thanks for the review.

Peace,
Jess

Very different! i love it!

Very good asmodia I can see what you are trying to say I like it.

Good job!

I love the last line.I can't really explain what I think of this poem,but it's all positive!

Wow. Really great thought you have here, I really like it.

Jimmy was happy, till he lodged a bullet in his skullone more over, Hell's already full

Just brilliant.

wow... thats... interesting... haha. its good, but what does jimmy have to do with mona lisa. haha, its talking about mona lisa dont smile, and it brings a smile to my face when it comes to jimmy. idk why, but its sorta funny to me.hehe...haha...hoho... SANTA!no im just kidding... i think im in a better mood now... :-)i like smiley faces...later,~mal

Wow. Powerful viewpoint. I see where you're coming from though. Good job.

Wow, I like this... especially the lines about the Mona Lisa. I don't know, somehow that really conveys some pretty emotions. Good job.

wow... such an intense and powerful message~~ the image was haunting~ good work!

keep writing!