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| BlutEngel Royale 2006-02-02 ch 1, | I have to honestly say, you have some of the best pieces I've ever read. This one is awe-inspiring as well. Great, great job. |
| Lukertin 2005-10-29 ch 1, | Wow...I'm not sure how to respond to this piece. I can only think of how much like a prophesy it sounds, like a prophet warning the people of what will happen to them. The language you use is utterly fascinating, the rhythm is perfect, in fact everything a poem should be is found here (basically what you won't find in FP). I love the descriptive language especially, it's especially hard to paint such vivid worlds when stuck in the constraint of poetry. Kudos to you. |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-10-09 ch 1, | love the imagery~~ the poem had a nice continuity~ good work keep writing! |