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Reviews For: Vengeful Epiphany

BlutEngel Royale
2006-02-02
ch 1,
I have to honestly say, you have some of the best pieces I've ever read.

This one is awe-inspiring as well. Great, great job.
Lukertin
2005-10-29
ch 1,
Wow...I'm not sure how to respond to this piece. I can only think of how much like a prophesy it sounds, like a prophet warning the people of what will happen to them.

The language you use is utterly fascinating, the rhythm is perfect, in fact everything a poem should be is found here (basically what you won't find in FP). I love the descriptive language especially, it's especially hard to paint such vivid worlds when stuck in the constraint of poetry. Kudos to you.
mizu no kokoro
2005-10-09
ch 1,
love the imagery~~ the poem had a nice continuity~ good work

keep writing!
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