I'be been stricken speechless. Wonderful imagry- power that doesn't take away from the central theme.

(I always thought freedom was more like a horse than an eagle.)

wow, amazing piece of poetry. makes me think of the time when i used to be on the track team...run spirit of freedom...

i really love the spiritual words in this poem. they make it so beautiful. ^_^

This poem goes along well when you're listening to Bryan Adams. n_n;

Yes, this conjured images of the wild horses in my mind when I read it. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, but good job!

Nice poem. Keep writing! ^_^

~Anna~

wow~~ some very elegant imagery~~ i love how you described the sky with sapphire blue~ good work

keep writing!